2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用学术词汇；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

with the development of the computer technolgy, online shopping is becoming more and popular .It not only has advantages but also disadvantages. When it appears, we do not need to go shopping by ourselves,we can sit in front of a computer,surf the internet,book the things.We only need to do is that the postman comes to our home.we sign our name.It is convenient for us to go shopping online. It saves our time. Some are not in favor of shopping online.they say it is easy for us to cheat. we can not see the things exactly.when we get the things.If we do not feel content about it,we can not return it quickly.if we buy clothes,we can not try it on by myself.It may be not fit us.