2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Now quite a few parents want to do all the things for their childen,such as the school , the work ,the marrage and so on which their children will do in the furture .they just love their children too much ,which make them doing that continutly .However, the way is not good for the growth of the child which will make them more and more rely on his parents . Independence is very important for everyone. Thus, parents should do something less which the children should do . Let them learn the way to solution a problam. Go to the shool what to like ,do the work what to enjoy ,choose the girl who he love. The children have rights to choose their way to live . Although the life has many difficults to go through,it will be a kind of happiness.