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作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。
Now quite a few parents want to do all the things for their children,such as the school , the work ,the marrage and so on which their children will do in the future .They just love their children too much ,which make them losing in the way of teaching their babis However, the way is not good to the growth of the child which will make them more and more rely on his parents . Independence is very important for everyone. Thus, parents should do something less which the children should do . Let them learn the way to solution a problam. Go to the shool what to like ,do the work what to enjoy ,choose the girl who he loves. The children have rights to choose their way to live . Although the life has many difficults to go through,it will be a kind of happiness.
