2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Now quite a few parents want to do all the things for their children,such as the school , the work ,the marriage and so on which their children will do in the future .They just love their children too much ,which make them lose in the way of teaching their babies However, the way is not good to the growth of the child which will make them more and more rely on his parents . Independence is very important for everyone. Thus, parents should do something less which the children should do . Let them learn the way to solution a problem. Go to the school what to like ,do the work what to enjoy ,choose the girl who he loves. The children have rights to choose their way to live . Although the life has many difficulties to go through,it will be a kind of happiness.