小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Tom is one of my good friends.He is tall and fat.He has black hair.He is come from China.We always play football after school everyday.He hates math,because it is difficult to him. And he like singing and running.We always play football after school everyday.He hates math,because it is difficult to him.