2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(11):美国学生访问团

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On behalf of my school,thank you for accepting our invitation,I am very happpy that you can come here,welcome to our beautiful school.I n order to let you know more about it,I would like to introduce it to you.With the 40 years history,our school is located in the city of the centary.It has a wonderful campus environment.Many famous people graduated from it.Anything is great but,students here are not good at English.So I think we can communiate with each other so that you can teach us how to learn English,and we can teach you another thing.Finally,I hope you will have a good time during the time here.