福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

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The Internet Everyday we need to use internet to do anything.Such as studing working and trvaling.But every has two sides. Anyhow,the internet can reduce our work time.We can use internet to understand the world's news.Some knowldge we can learning throught inernet.Some qustions we can save to use internet. Then anything has two side,some crimtors use internet to do some bad things.Some children fall in internet ,not go to school on time. So we need to use internet in reguler