2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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with the development of the society ,computer plays an increasely impont role in our daily lify,it benifit us a lot 、but it also does some harmful for our lives the computer changed our life ,it makes our life convenient,we can go shopping on the internet without out the door ,wo can knowledge about the latest news all around throught it ,and wo also can chat with each other at every time , although the computer benifit us a lot ,but,we also should control it,at present,many teenages are invoved in internet games,it's harmful to their health,besides,we can do everything through the net,it may give the opportunity foy the cimes, one coin has two points,wo should take advantage of the computer.