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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
可适当增加从句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，在词汇拼写也要再接再厉；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Smartphone has many advantages.More and more people use it. The reasons are as follows. First of all,people use smartphone to communicate with others.Second,people use smartphone Internet.For example,people can use it to search for information,listen to music,watch movies,online shopping.Third,people can take pictures with it anywhere. In short,smartphone is very convenient,it brings many benifits.The use of smartphons we should reasonable,make it to the service of humanity.
