2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

There are many factors effecting whether we can succeed.In my view,direction,diligent and don't give up are the main factors. To begin with direction,only we have a right direction,can we be closer and closer to our destination.In other words,if we feel like succeeding,we must choose the right thing which apply to not only us but also the society. Furthermore,we must work hard to gain success.Chance favors only the prepared mind.Before we succeed,we should work hard to guarantee that if the chance comes we can catch of it. As a saying goes,"Failure is the mother of success."Only when we don't give up trying time and time again after failure can we succeed.On the way of success,we will confront many failures,we must learn from failures and don't give up ,we will be stronger and stronger. Obviously,we can draw a conclusion that only when we choose the right direction,work hard and don't give up,may we succeed.