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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；从句用的不错，但有几处从句错误；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了。
As we all know, there are majority of colleges and universities students whose who haven’t choose their favourite major subject because of variety reason. Due to this reason, it is a tragedy that most of them choose to play computer games or do other things what they are interested in to kill their spare their time instead of studying hard their major subject because they don’t like it. Fortunately for me,I choice (picked) to my favourite major subject and had a good time in my college life. Although I know my english is not very well, that I like it is important. My blood surge when I’m studying english and want to know more about it. I believe that I can reach hight level of english, as long as I stick to study it. Everyone may have more or less some mistakes decisions in their life, but it is important that one should clearly know what they like or want to do in the next capture of their life.Why don’t you change or find what you really like instead of complaining and regretting. All in all, interest should always be the first priority and it is the good way to accelerate success, and do what you truly want to.
