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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用。

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We all know that each coin have two sides, online socializing and offline socializing without exception. It is important for us that how we use its advantage and avoid making use of its disadvantage. To recognize correctly it is equal important. On the online socializing one can communicate with anyone who are online and find someone who have same hobby with you. It is very convent that we can keep in touch with our friends, family and relatives without worry about distant if they are online, and know the latest news about them. But most of us more and more rely on online socializing as well as spend much time on it. They have less time to get in touch with (contact) people around with them. It is time for us to spend much time on offline socializing, and I’d prefer offline socializing because I consider that by directly talking to individuals can more directly touch with each other , such as hug, handshake and kiss. It better show your respect, friends and zeal to someone who are you talking to. From my perspective, nowadays, especially people who live in information era, why not they spend less time on online socializing instead of offline socializing.

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