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In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above bar chart,we can observe distinctly that it indicates that the percentage of household consumer durables which can be divided into three groups is sold in UK from 1972 to 1983. Firstly,a number of appliances were in a high percentage of homes for the entire period.These included TVs,vacuum cleaners,refrigerators and washing machines.TV ownership was the highest,growing from approximately 93% to 98% over the eleven-year period,while washing machine ownership,the lowest of this group,increased frm 66% to 80%. The second group included central heating and the telephone and these showed the most dramatic rise with increases of 27 for the central heating and 35% for telephone.At the beginning of the period these appliances had been bought by 37% ad 42% of homes respectively. The final group were appliances that were only introduced into the market during the period shown.The video recorder was quickly accepted into households,achieving 18% ownership by 1983.The dishwasher had less impact,with its ownership slowly rising from 3% to 5% between 1978 and 1983. In all,in terms of the figures which is provided,we have no difficulty but can obtain the conclusion that British households enjoyed an ever-increasing ownership of consumer durables from 1972 to 1983.