2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；请注意分段。

as we all known nothing succeeds without a strong will . From past to now , many great person can succeed because they have a strong will. those people who have a strong will they can finish tough tasks .AS a student,we also should have a strong will to study. for example , as a english learner we must learn how to insist that is to say we should have a strong will for listening, writing,reading,and so on .IF we don't work hard then we will become a useless person .