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It is no denying that the internet is playing a increasingly role in interpersonal communication.Dose anyone hold the same attitude towards interpersonal communication by internet?Definetely not,as to this issue,opinions vary from people to people. For those who hold the opinion that interpersonal communication on internet has good impact on us.Firstly,it provides us convenience,which we can talk to each other anytime and anywhere, as long as you have a computer and you can surf online.In this way,we don't have to meet someone on fixed time,which can save a lot of time. Secondly,it can expand the circle of friends.It enables us to know more people. However,others maintain that it has detrimental impact on interpersonal communication.First and foremost,communicating on internet can easily give people a feeling of unrealistics,which may give rise to people's untrust to each other.Moreover, it decreases the pleasure of face-to-face meeting.
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