题目要求:
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解:
题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中有几处句子错误;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;请注意分段。
The advertisements that broadcast in TV, radio, newspaper and so on are becoming more and more fabulous, and attract people to watch and to buy the related things, which results in a unique fact that some special brands are very popular, and are the confront of the fashion. Some people come to believe that the advertising manipulates people's buying habit, which makes us all want to pay for the same, do the same, and look the same. However, in my opinion, the advertising only has a little influence on our preference.