2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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think why you are keeping ,if you want to give up. when i was kid , my mum always tell me , fail is not afird, give up is really afird and a lot of people will be laguht . so when u was baby ,kids and now, if u want to succees ,u must keeping u dream . keeping u mind and u can get achievement .