2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法方面做的很棒，加强复杂句的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，文中有些单词拼错了；请注意分段。

computer and man With sciences rapidly developing computer is becoming more and more important and useful for everyone.Now we can use computer shopping on the internet or make intertainment by listening songs or watching films or playing games.Even though computer bring us convience ,it also make bad influence on our lives.For example ,many children are addicted into vitual world.They waste too much time to computers that they have no time to achieve their course and they failed to do enough exercises to make a strong body.I really think it's fatal and serrious .And active and efficient measures should be offed to make the environment more cleanly and orderly.