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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17600
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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作者词汇基础不错,同时请加强单词拼写的检查;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。

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It seems that when people face to some complex condition which confuses them to make the appropriate dicission that have thought logically in their minds they probably snap the judgement freely.I don't think it's a acceptable way to tacle the question. Any decision should be made carefully with the following reasons.Firstly,the snap judgement usually made in the occasion that people have no clue what to do next or what the reasonable choice.If we just make a judgement that full of stochasticity,it almostly abberent .Hence,when the result turns out that the choice you made is absolutely foolish,the tons of regrets will pour in your mind ,however,you never have the other chance to correct .It let me call my memory of my first relationship with a five-year-older boy.I am young when I first met him when I'm in college.He confessed to me after we first met when we even know each other's names.I'm too young to solve the problem,so I just believe that it will not lose anything to us.Whereas,I found that I don't like him because of knowing nothing about him .So I broke up with him ,but he didn't accept.I were scared,and regreting. I forcely believe that snap jugement is not responsible to ourseles and other people .It is the best way to make a dicision after a long-term carefully anlysis.

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