2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。

Nowadays,we find that excessive packaging is becoming increasingly serious,from a bar of chocolate to a set of TV.However,as we all know,overpackaging is one of the causes of wasting. In my opinions,the 2 following reasons should be blamed to overpackaging.First,in the aspect of manufactors,they can gain more profit by overpackaging.Second,for consumers,the prettier the package it is,the higher status they show. As a result,in order to diminish overpackaging,2 suggestions need putting into practice.First of all,the government is supposed to change consumers'idea on packaging,allowing them to perceive that we should pay more attention to the quality instead of the package.Besides,some methods of simplifying the packages should be taken for manufactures. I have an expectation that the waste of resource caused by overpackaging will reduce day by day.