Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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We can see form the picture, it shows that two parts of status,the one side is that the higher education degree you have got,the higher erarnings you will get,and the other side is that if you get a higher degree, you will not be unemployed. if you can get a bachelor's degree or above, and your earnings will higher than the average line.And there is a special status, someone who get the professional degree earning more money than who get the doctor degree