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Nowadays,a lot of families only have a child in China, so the children are usually induged by all family memebers.Litlle by little,they are accustomed to depending their parents,no matter what do they do.This is a common phenomenon in our society. There are some ways to help children to be independent.Above all,discinpling them to be an independent person will quickly make you face with all kinds of difficults that you shall run in the future.Secondly,we should accompany with the children making some suggestions for them.When they made successsful,please praised them.If they failed,we would encourage them and help them to sovle it.Eventually,the parents should tell them that successful person is always independent on himself and strive for his goal no matter whenever . As far as I am concerned,if the parents want their children live more courlorful and meaningful,they should take some measures to handle it because they cannot accompany with their children the whole life.Only in this ways,both parents and children will more happier in their life.
