2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(12):本校食堂

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To be honest, the canteen is very clean, and the food is delicious, also we are well served; however, the dishes are too expensive , and there are few sorts of dishes to choose, worse still, we have to wait a long time to get the food. As mentioned above, I'd like to give some suggestions. Above all, the price of dishes should be made reasonable, if they are cheaper than those of restaurants outside school, more and more students will prefer to eat in our canteen, the boss can gain profit as well; second, try to change the sorts of dishes often , especially the vegetables , you know, everybody is tired of eating the same things ,it can also appeal more students; finally, I think the canteen needs more servants , it can reduce the waiting time .