2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Our life will always be filled with challenges.we’d better to admit this and decide to be happy anyway. but how many people can do it?we always say to ourselves that our life will be complete when our spouse gets act together, when we get a house, luxury car, and are able to go on a nice vacation,our life will be better, the truth is ,there’s no better time than right now. so we should live in the moment, no matter how harsh the environment, no matter how hard life is ,don’t forget to smile.