2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；加强局势的变化，会取得更好的成绩；请注意分段。

nowadays,more and more undergraduates complaint that finding work is difficult.The reasons of leading to this phenomenon are as follows.First of all,they spent much time in learning special subjects.Only when they started to find work,they realized their own lacking necessary profession practice.Next,competing among undergraduates become more and more strain,which lead to whichever undergraduate will have a smaller chance to find jobs.therefore,having a suggestion that undergraduates often find a job on the side,so that accumlate