2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；能够简单运用一些从句；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；请注意分段。

The weather is getting cold,but my heart is getting warm .And all of this stems from him who is reading my diary.To be honest,wrote these sentences is as hard as I ran in the morning everyday ,sometimes,I want to give up .but there is a voice kept saying in my mind,Aries,you can’t give up!you can do it.so whenever I want to give up,I said to myself,Aries you can do it.