2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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nowadays,more and more undergraduates complaintthat finding work is difficult.The reasons for this phenomenon are as follows.First of all,they spent much time in learning special subjects.Only when they started to find work,they realized their lacking necessary professional practice.Next,competition among undergraduates become more and more strain,which lead to an undergraduate having a smaller chance for find jobs.therefore,it is highly suggested that undergraduates should find a part-time job,so that accumlate relevant working experience.