2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays, more and more undergraduates complaint that finding work is difficult.The reasons for this phenomenon are as follows.First of all, they spent much time in learning special subjects.Only when they started to find work, they realized they're lac necessary professional practice.Next, competition among undergraduates has become more and more strain, which leads to an undergraduate having a smaller chance for finding jobs.Therefore, it is highly suggested that undergraduates should find a part-time job, so that accumulate relevant working experience.