2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；请注意分段。

Nowadays, more and more undergraduates complaint that finding work is difficult.The reasons for this phenomenon are as follows.First of all, they spent much time in learning special subjects.Only when they started to find work, they realized they're lack necessary professional practice.Next, competition among undergraduates has become more and more strain, which leads to an undergraduate having a smaller chance for finding jobs.Therefore, it is highly suggested that undergraduates should find a part-time job to accumulate relevant working experience.