2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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Nowaday, the quality of life has a big decreased in large cities. In some small cities, this problem is also become more and more popular. There are various reasons why will lead to this solution, such as environment pollution, work stress or the higher standard of price. The main reason is environment pollution. With the private car growing up and the pollution of industry, the air quality is worse than before. People live in big cities offen take mask to work or shopping. Graduated students increase and the work position is limited, people are willing to do the relaxed job, therefore the work stress is climbing every day. Although people find a good job, they also work hard to ensure they can get better among all people then they have the chance to promotion. The higher standard of price is also the problem. the price are more higher than before but the wages of people do not rise, they do not have too much money to but thing that they want. For solve those problem, government need to set up some polities to protect people's profit. About rnvironment pollution, planting more trees in the road of cities and use high technology to change the air quality. People can go travel, talk to friend usually or do some exciese to relax, than reduce work stress. Government should suitablely increase peolple's salary and keep the price of goods so that people have the ability to buy goods. In conclusion, for the quality of live reduce in big cities can use various way to solve. However, it require people and government try hard together, then our city will become more better.