单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the weeklong holiday. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions (given in Chinese) below:
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