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Hello,my name is Li Mei.I'm 13 years old.My father、mother、sister and me make a family.I like sports.Especially play volleyball.I'm take part in the school volleyball teem.My favorite food is chicken、carrots、ice cream.But I hate french fries,because it's not good for healthy.My best friend is Wei Fang.She also like playing volleyball.So,this is me.Could you introduce youself?