1997年专四作文真题:Does More pressure good to us

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Living in this rapid devaloped society ,people have to fasten their step so that they can not fall behind others and keep speed with the society,which means we need absorb more knowledge nutrition as the power of forward.but at the sametimes,too much pressure of study will bring us negtive effect.so the significent part is we should keep a balance bewteen study and entertament.