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When referred to communication ,it means talk to talk traditionly.But as everyone knows nowdays internet is blowing all different aspects in our life including communication.For example ,people now are more likely to communicate with friends and familiers on the internet ,not only because it's convinment but also substantial.Weather this phenomenon should be advocated,now i would give my analysis.
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