字数:200满分:100分
作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
The above two pictures show two fans' admiration for their idol-"Beckham".One is printing his idol's name on his face,while the other one cuts a hair style which is the same to Beckham for 300 yuan.Both of them demonstrate the foreign culture's influence on Chinese. Since 1987,the revolution of China has an outstanding achievement.The relationship between national and international becomes closer and closer.We have accepted so many foreign cultures so that being crazy for them,such as the admiration of young generation to the foreign festival.Although it makes us join the world's family,it also brings a competence to our traditional culture.The new festivals are so fantastic that our new generation forgets our conservative festivals. Hence,when it comes to learning the foreign culture,we should treat it with a selective perspective.Accepting others culture is not unconditional while taking the essence to its dregs.As a consequence,only with a criterion for judgement can our national culture has a splendid future.