题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On maintaining trust There are many principles when we are making friends and doing families.Person has different rules to obey,for example,one recieve respect from others after giving out his respect.If we want to have a good relation with people around us,it is necessary for us to maintaining turst. Trust is something that eventually help people live better.Trust needs your true heart when talking,working and thinking all the time.Trust is that we humans own an optimitic atitude.When we are home,we should not doubt father or mother who loves you better.Or we should not be angry with our friends before taking the first sight.It needs our patient to live with someone. In the back of my mind I think that maintaining trust is the best way to hold a long time motion.