2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中拼写错误较多，平时练习过程中应注意词汇量的积累；采用了一些简单的从句；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；可以适当增加副词的使用。

With delevopment of techology, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is the ablilty of computer and man. Compared with computer, does human brain are clever? From the side of calculation, the computer faster than the huaman. Evenmore, it can calculate the data which human cannot calculate. Computer can do the diffcult project, control the stystem, control the temperture inside the room, keep the data all the time ect. On the controvery, human' menomery is short. Human can not keep the data all the time, he would forget the thing which he went through. But computer never get over than people. Because, computer just operate into a system which created by the human. It just according to the stystem to operate. Human create the computer, of course, human are clever than computer.