题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
There are many principles when we are making friends and doing families.Persons have different rules to obey,for example,one receive respect from others after giving out his respect.If we want to have a good relation with people around us,it is necessary for us to maintain trust. Trust is something that eventually help people live better.Trust needs your true heart when talking,working and thinking all the time.Trust is that we humans own an optimistic attitude.When we are home,we should not doubt father or mother who loves you better.Or we should not be angry with our friends before taking the first sight.It needs our patient to live with someone. In the back of my mind I think that trust is the best way to hold a long time motion.