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In recent years, we cannot ignore the fact that more and more residents have been moved to the outskirts of cities.Many of them are born of activities focusing on downtown area which includes economic activities,politics and recreation and so forth.Although a sizable percentage of people are not willing to move to suburb.I am more fond for suburban life rather than city life. Actually, city life offer us many conveniences and recreations.That is the principle reason why some people persist in living in the city.However,there are higher living expenses than living in countryside.We just consider these places filled of petrol fumes and toxic gases,noises of automobile.Except for,people have to live in a tiny house and pay so much rent for it.On the contrast,the advantages of living in suburb includes having fresh air,closing to nature and enjoying a quiet environment.However,sometimes,we have to walk for several miles to work,which brings us lots of inconvenience.However，the situation will be changed out of the efforts of workers and governments. The suburban life will become the main style of life for a considerable of people in a city.With the improvement of facilities and traffic condition，Suburban life hold great superiority over city life.
