Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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In nowdays education become more and more important. What your degree is mean how much your money get. Here have a report about unemployment rate in 2011 and median wekly earnings in 2011.In 2011 the unemployment rate is about 7.6%,but if you education less than high school diploma it would de 14.1%.however,if you education more than Associate degree it would be less than 6.8%.Let us make us eyes on median weekly earnings.In 2011 persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers can get adout 797. But the person who get less than Associate degree his earn will less than 768 or lesser. If he can get bachelor's deg get