2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；能够使用一些不错的从句；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意。

As many families have one child At present, so many parents like to arrange everything for their children.However,many children really do not like the action that their parents have done for them and parents also feel unhappy about it. Whether what the parents did benefits for children or not. Here i want to express my own idea. To this question,i think it is a good thing for children.But parents must not do all for their children because this will make them undependent and if time is long, children will generate the depended feeling .Then they will not like to do their own things. Even they want to do, they also have no ability to do so. Try to think they live alone outside one day, how should they do. At last,i want to say to all parents, if you want your children not in that situation,please cultivate them to be undependent from the young