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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13015
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Communication has a lot of benefits for us. First, we can transmit information with each other by it. Data plays an important role in our daily life that the more you get messages, the better your life will be. Second, we need to communicate to be friends with the others, which will make us happy and positive with the feelings that someone truly cares about us. Third, sometimes we may have few conflicts when facing the different interests. In order to address them, we should understand the oppositions they hold and try to develop a common sense through communication. Last but not least, it is a good way to improve the efficiency and effect at work. For example, when the leader tells one to do a certain work, he tends to finish it according to his own understanding, which in turn will not satisfy his leader. As a result, he may have to do it again. Thus, it is cost time without communication. All in all, communication is so important that none of us can live without it. We should pay more attention to communicate with the people we meet anywhere.

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