小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a goodfriend who is called Lilin, we met each other for a long time, infact in that time we were neighbor when we were so young, she is very important in my life.she is very thoughtful and seem always ready to help others.she has a very pleasant personality in my mind..I'm always enjoy to get together with her.