题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On Maintaining Trust As we all know that maintaining trust is a very important interpersonal relationship, and it's difficult to build trust.So, today we will disscuss about how to build a trust. First of all ,as I think the most important thing is to believe others.If only believe each others and don't suspect others by no reasons that we could build trust among the people.second, being a person that can be believed by others.If a person who always lie to others that he/she won't be believed by others.For third,to believe others bravely. we shouldn't just believe others when we think they are worth to believe.we should believe the humanity was kindness,and the most of person are worth to believe. If we have done all of these,Iit will be easy to build trust among the person.