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2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:24浏览次数:3563
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题目 Creating a Green Campus
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1.建设绿色校园很重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……
3.为了建设绿色校园,我们应该……
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With the continuous improvement of economic level,the environmental damage becomes more and more serious.It's important that a university student should rise their aware of building a green campus ,because we have a duty to the society or even to the earth as an human being. Personally, our campus is quite and beautiful because there lies a lot of plants. Building a green campus doesn't only mean create a green environment by planting flowers ,grass and trees ,besides ,we should take more and more serious measures to face worse and worse environment. To begin with , we can advocate that we should reduce the rate of using plastic bags in our campus.Secondly,a place can be set for collecting something useless for building a recycling campus.At last but not least,we should encourage people who are keen on environment protecting to translate their passion into action.

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