作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。
With the continuous improvement of economic level,the environmental damage becomes more and more serious.It's important that a university student should rise their aware of building a green campus ,because we have a duty to the society or even to the earth as an human being. Personally, our campus is quite and beautiful because there lies a lot of plants. Building a green campus doesn't only mean create a green environment by planting flowers ,grass and trees ,besides ,we should take more and more serious measures to face worse and worse environment. To begin with , we can advocate that we should reduce the rate of using plastic bags in our campus.Secondly,a place can be set for collecting something useless for building a recycling campus.At last but not least,we should encourage people who are keen on environment protecting to translate their passion into action.