Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句和长句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。
Where am I now in comparison to where I want to be? What makes me happy or unhappy? Why do I go to work every day?What can I do today to fulfill my human needs?How am I making a difference in this life? These problems I do not know the answer.i am confused now,I don’t know how to face life?I don’t know how to make myself happier all the time?I don’t know how to ignore people’s gossip?And now I feel so so so sad,I just want to cry,I need a shoulder to cry,I feel tired,I feel pressure make me can’t breathe.