Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Where am I now in comparison to where I want to be? What makes me happy or unhappy? Why do I go to work every day?What can I do today to fulfill my human needs?How am I making a difference in this life? These problems I do not know the answer.I am confused now,I don’t know how to confront life?I don’t know how to make myself happier all the time?I don’t know how to ignore people’s gossip?And now I feel so sad,I just want to cry,I need a shoulder to cry,I feel tired,I feel pressure make me can’t breathe.