2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above curve diagram,we can observe distinctly not only that it compares the rate of smoking of men and women in Someland from 1960 to 2000 but also it can be seen the rate of smoking for both men and women was declining and that fewer women smoked during the period. In 1960,600 men in every 1000 smoked.This number decreased gradually to approximately 500 by 1974 and continued to decrease steeply to roughly 250 by 2000. In contrast,the smoking rate for women was very low at only 80 in every 1000 in 1960.By 1968 this increased to nearly 170 and rose again more steeply to almost 320 in 1977.The rate of female smoker then remained stable at around 320 until in 1984,at which point the figures began to decline and dropped to 200 by 2000. According to the figures which is provided,we have no difficulty but can obtain a conclusion that the rate of smoking of men dropped throughout period but was always higher than that of women.The rate of female smokers increased until 1977,but then decreased for the rest of the period.