2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；注意文中个别的句子错误；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

The strong will is a valuable virtue and that should be treseture,as an old saying goes:nothing succeeds without a strong will,what this is that strong will corresponber good physical,if we want to succeed,we must possess it. The fact is that,the strong will is an inportant guarantee for success,because it require you to do everything by all always. In the past,the success all possess the strong will,so i can believe that it is necessary to keep the kind of good quailty. As a studate ,if you not to study hard,you will became an useless people in the future. so in my opinion, i think we should have a strong will ,because that can ears us respect of others,and thus promoto our study,career or the others aspect of life.