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In a world moving on the wheels of globalization and advanced technology. Adolescents are caught in a dilemma whether or not it is a good choice to purchase goods on line. Many citizens take the attitude that online shopping does have brought many drawbacks. Nonetheless, others hold a totally different viewpoint. Those who are in favor of former viewpoint would argue that it does have many drawbacks to shopping on line. They hold this point simply for the reason that customers pay large sum of money only to find being cheated. Admittedly, those who stand by the above argument have an element of truth to some extent. On the contrary, it is due to online shopping that makes our life convenient and efficient. This is especially true for the white-collars who have little time to go to the department store. Were it left to me to decide, I would prefer the latter without hesitation. As far as I am concerned that I am so busy in daily life. Taking the above-mentioned into account, we may reasonably draw a conclusion that the benefits of online shopping outweigh its drawbacks.
